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PostSubject: War: A Post Apocolypse Story    Thu Sep 23, 2010 10:35 am

This is my new story I'll edit this later right now I just wanna get it up.


Prologue

The World has ended. The sky's on fire, the buildings crumble, the people scream. I'm sitting in an office building quietly filing a balance sheet. Everyone else had run away, except the janitor but who cares about him? All the normal people are running, but I'm finishing office work. I figure we are all going to die anyway so why bother running? At least now I've caught up with my work, I'm a little obsessed like that. As I walk out of the building I am greeted with desolation. Cars everywhere scattered like a child's toys messily left about his room. Buildings are destroyed some are falling apart, and craters decorate the streets like dimples upon the asphalt. I take a step forward, a step towards my new chaotic world. Then it happened, then I felt an explosion rock the Earth behind me. At the same time I felt my feet leave the ground. The world was spiraling, a tower of tower of fire rose, and then, blackness.

The World has ended

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PostSubject: Re: War: A Post Apocolypse Story    Thu Sep 23, 2010 8:15 pm

Is the entire story first person? Also hurry up and edit the rest I wanna see!
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PostSubject: Re: War: A Post Apocolypse Story    Thu Sep 23, 2010 8:25 pm

No the entire story isn't in first person

I meant edit as in the first part of the post that stuff before the prologue?

but good to know someone likes it.

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PostSubject: Re: War: A Post Apocolypse Story    Thu Sep 23, 2010 9:42 pm

What happens neeeeext?
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PostSubject: Re: War: A Post Apocolypse Story    Fri Sep 24, 2010 5:51 am

I'm working on it, I've even made up an epic quote to tide you over for a while

"The end isn't forever for all endings make way to new beginnings, even after death, there is life." ~Blake Van Dongen

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PostSubject: Re: War: A Post Apocolypse Story    Wed Sep 29, 2010 12:09 pm

Letting you all know that tis story isn't dead I'm still working on it, I was just having some trouble beginning chapter two but I've managed to move past that so things will hopefully be going along more smoothly now

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PostSubject: Re: War: A Post Apocolypse Story    Mon Nov 08, 2010 10:51 am

Well I scrapped chapter two entirely because I didn't like the way it was going, but seriously chapter 1 is done I just haven't posted it.

Oh in case your wondering the thing above that's the prologue

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PostSubject: Re: War: A Post Apocolypse Story    Mon Nov 08, 2010 7:59 pm

Then post iiiiiiittttttt!
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PostSubject: Re: War: A Post Apocolypse Story    Thu Nov 11, 2010 8:23 am

I know! I need to but I dunno, just lazy.

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PostSubject: Re: War: A Post Apocolypse Story    Thu Nov 11, 2010 7:45 pm

*Slap!*
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PostSubject: Re: War: A Post Apocolypse Story    Thu Nov 11, 2010 10:47 pm

LOL
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PostSubject: Re: War: A Post Apocolypse Story    Wed Nov 24, 2010 8:21 am

OWWWWW!!! Alright Alright I'll get to it, eventually.

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PostSubject: Re: War: A Post Apocolypse Story    Wed Dec 01, 2010 4:31 pm

Still waiting... Should I slap you agains? *SLAPPITY SLAP!* XD
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PostSubject: Re: War: A Post Apocolypse Story    Wed Dec 08, 2010 9:19 pm

haha XDDD

guess this means you should really get to it
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PostSubject: Re: War: A Post Apocolypse Story    Sun Dec 12, 2010 11:12 am

Okay okay I'll post it I'll post it as soon as I fidn the book its in!

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